S&H and fanfiction

[duluthdg]

This is just for fun as a thank you for my editors, Dawn and Anachron.  They've been a huge help on my last couple stories and beyond!  Writing fan fiction is hard work...


H:  I really appreciate this, Starsk.  An author can never edit his own work.
S:  Happy to do it, Hutch.  I never knew you were into slash fiction.



H:  I'm so nervous to have you read that.  I'm sweating.
S:  I'm being very objective.  Don't worry.



H:  You know, you don't have to read it right now.  Take your time.
S:  I can't put it down, Hutch.  Once I read it through, I'll make my edits.



S:  Not now, Cap'n.  I'm busy.



S:  This part doesn't make sense.  I don't know.  The sentence structure is a little awkward.



S:  You have to learn to cut back on the metaphors.  Every detail needs to move the story forward.  Do you see?



H:  The whole damn page is red, Starsk.
S:  You asked me to help you.



H:  What does that mark mean?
S:  You need to start a new paragraph.



S:  Yeah, it's looking better, but I still have a problem with this scene.
H:  Damn it.



S:  He's pretty uptight, Cap'n.  He's looking it over one last time before he hands it off to you for the final edit.



D:  What does this word mean, Hutchinson?  Spunk?  "He was covered in spunk."  Does that mean he had a lot of energy?
H;  I told you that was a stupid word for it, Starsk.



H:  Fifty Shades eat your heart out.  Who'd a thought what the public really wanted was a little action in the backseat of a striped tomato.



S:  Where's my cut?  I was your editor after all.

Comments

[anachron.livejournal.com]

Yep, that's exactly how I imagined you. **giggle**

[duluthgirl.livejournal.com]

A. Shut up.

[anachron.livejournal.com]

Oh, duluth, I'm sorry :) Here, this will make you feel better:

[duluthgirl.livejournal.com]

Oh, yes! That's much, much better! Look at those long, delicious legs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I forgive you. :)

[wightfaerie.livejournal.com]

OMG. The man should not be allowed out in public. He needs to be kept locked up in my private dungeon. ;-P

[duluthgirl.livejournal.com]

Yes, Anachron knows how to float my boat. :)

[wightfaerie.livejournal.com]

Mine, too. I'm floating very nicely at the moment, thank you. :-D

[duluthgirl.livejournal.com]

Can I frame that icon and hang it on my wall?

[wightfaerie.livejournal.com]

Mine or Anachron's? Mine, you can have with pleasure. Do you want me to email you a bigger version?

[duluthgirl.livejournal.com]

I would like the beach one, AND the one from the pilot with his towel one. Both please!!!! Those legs....

[wightfaerie.livejournal.com]

Email on it's way to you. <3

[anachron.livejournal.com]

you and duluth can share him, as long as I can have the one in the background:

[duluthgirl.livejournal.com]

Give me a week, A., and you'll have to share him. ;)

[wightfaerie.livejournal.com]

Course you can, sweetie. Have fun. :-)