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duluth ([personal profile] duluthdg) wrote2013-03-14 02:33 pm
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S&H and fanfiction

This is just for fun as a thank you for my editors, Dawn and Anachron.  They've been a huge help on my last couple stories and beyond!  Writing fan fiction is hard work...

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H:  I really appreciate this, Starsk.  An author can never edit his own work.
S:  Happy to do it, Hutch.  I never knew you were into slash fiction.


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H:  I'm so nervous to have you read that.  I'm sweating.
S:  I'm being very objective.  Don't worry.


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H:  You know, you don't have to read it right now.  Take your time.
S:  I can't put it down, Hutch.  Once I read it through, I'll make my edits.


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S:  Not now, Cap'n.  I'm busy.


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S:  This part doesn't make sense.  I don't know.  The sentence structure is a little awkward.


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S:  You have to learn to cut back on the metaphors.  Every detail needs to move the story forward.  Do you see?


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H:  The whole damn page is red, Starsk.
S:  You asked me to help you.


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H:  What does that mark mean?
S:  You need to start a new paragraph.


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S:  Yeah, it's looking better, but I still have a problem with this scene.
H:  Damn it.


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S:  He's pretty uptight, Cap'n.  He's looking it over one last time before he hands it off to you for the final edit.


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D:  What does this word mean, Hutchinson?  Spunk?  "He was covered in spunk."  Does that mean he had a lot of energy?
H;  I told you that was a stupid word for it, Starsk.


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H:  Fifty Shades eat your heart out.  Who'd a thought what the public really wanted was a little action in the backseat of a striped tomato.


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S:  Where's my cut?  I was your editor after all.


[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, thanks! Baby is so great to have recced this. :) Glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] wightfaerie.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 09:08 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG. The man should not be allowed out in public. He needs to be kept locked up in my private dungeon. ;-P

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, Anachron knows how to float my boat. :)

[identity profile] wightfaerie.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Mine, too. I'm floating very nicely at the moment, thank you. :-D

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Can I frame that icon and hang it on my wall?

[identity profile] anachron.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
you and duluth can share him, as long as I can have the one in the background:


[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Give me a week, A., and you'll have to share him. ;)

[identity profile] wightfaerie.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Course you can, sweetie. Have fun. :-)

[identity profile] wightfaerie.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 10:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Mine or Anachron's? Mine, you can have with pleasure. Do you want me to email you a bigger version?

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
I would like the beach one, AND the one from the pilot with his towel one. Both please!!!! Those legs....

[identity profile] wightfaerie.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 10:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Email on it's way to you. <3
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[identity profile] lauramcewan.livejournal.com 2013-03-18 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
Hahaha that's awesome!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-18 01:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Laura! It was fun to make.

[identity profile] little-tristan.livejournal.com 2013-03-24 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-24 02:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

[identity profile] kerrys2boys.livejournal.com 2013-05-31 09:10 am (UTC)(link)
Ok...Just spat out my drink in one great splutter...too much to take! God the shot with Dobey "what does this word mean?" OMG - what a lot of laughs you've given to me today DG - my face has used muscles it hasn't exercised in ages.

BTW...I want more. You are one seriously funny "cutter". You must have won all those prizes when you were a kid where you had to provide the best fitting caption to a shot or a photo.
Edited 2013-05-31 09:12 (UTC)

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-05-31 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks k2b! :) You know, StarskyHutch 911 used to have a "Caption This" where they put a photo on there for everyone to caption. It was so fun, and everyone had such great responses. Haven't seen one in awhile. If you like this stuff, you should look up the tag, "caption this" and see if that brings them up! :)

[identity profile] miwahni.livejournal.com 2013-07-30 10:49 am (UTC)(link)
That was a LOT of fun! (here via [livejournal.com profile] crack_van

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-07-30 03:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, thanks so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :)

[identity profile] marianrose.livejournal.com 2013-07-30 08:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Really funny! Thanks so much for the great laugh. The pictures were so well chosen!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-07-30 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! I'm glad I could give you a laugh. :)
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[identity profile] mrs-sweetpeach.livejournal.com 2013-07-31 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad this hit the crack van as I doubt I'd have seen it otherwise and it's brilliant. The boys are always fun to look at but the story moves right along with the pictures you selected.

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-07-31 01:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so happy you found and enjoyed this! These are fun to put together because I get to look through so many pics of the boys. :)

[identity profile] diannes-53.livejournal.com 2013-08-01 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
DG that was too funny. I loved the screen caps and you did a wonderful job on the captions. It was perfect!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-08-01 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
So glad you liked it, Dianne! :D

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