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This is just for fun as a thank you for my editors, Dawn and Anachron.  They've been a huge help on my last couple stories and beyond!  Writing fan fiction is hard work...

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H:  I really appreciate this, Starsk.  An author can never edit his own work.
S:  Happy to do it, Hutch.  I never knew you were into slash fiction.


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H:  I'm so nervous to have you read that.  I'm sweating.
S:  I'm being very objective.  Don't worry.


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H:  You know, you don't have to read it right now.  Take your time.
S:  I can't put it down, Hutch.  Once I read it through, I'll make my edits.


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S:  Not now, Cap'n.  I'm busy.


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S:  This part doesn't make sense.  I don't know.  The sentence structure is a little awkward.


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S:  You have to learn to cut back on the metaphors.  Every detail needs to move the story forward.  Do you see?


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H:  The whole damn page is red, Starsk.
S:  You asked me to help you.


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H:  What does that mark mean?
S:  You need to start a new paragraph.


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S:  Yeah, it's looking better, but I still have a problem with this scene.
H:  Damn it.


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S:  He's pretty uptight, Cap'n.  He's looking it over one last time before he hands it off to you for the final edit.


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D:  What does this word mean, Hutchinson?  Spunk?  "He was covered in spunk."  Does that mean he had a lot of energy?
H;  I told you that was a stupid word for it, Starsk.


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H:  Fifty Shades eat your heart out.  Who'd a thought what the public really wanted was a little action in the backseat of a striped tomato.


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S:  Where's my cut?  I was your editor after all.


Date: 2013-03-14 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dawnebeth.livejournal.com
Absolutely LOVE that. heehee. Yes, Starsky, the editor is in the background, just happy that the story is spelled right and reads well. You found some perfect pictures to illustrate your manuscript. I applaud!

Date: 2013-03-14 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com
You know, when I was looking through caps, I found a LOT more of Starsky reading than Hutch. :D

Date: 2013-03-14 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dawnebeth.livejournal.com
Starsky is the reader in the family.

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