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This is just for fun as a thank you for my editors, Dawn and Anachron.  They've been a huge help on my last couple stories and beyond!  Writing fan fiction is hard work...

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H:  I really appreciate this, Starsk.  An author can never edit his own work.
S:  Happy to do it, Hutch.  I never knew you were into slash fiction.


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H:  I'm so nervous to have you read that.  I'm sweating.
S:  I'm being very objective.  Don't worry.


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H:  You know, you don't have to read it right now.  Take your time.
S:  I can't put it down, Hutch.  Once I read it through, I'll make my edits.


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S:  Not now, Cap'n.  I'm busy.


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S:  This part doesn't make sense.  I don't know.  The sentence structure is a little awkward.


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S:  You have to learn to cut back on the metaphors.  Every detail needs to move the story forward.  Do you see?


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H:  The whole damn page is red, Starsk.
S:  You asked me to help you.


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H:  What does that mark mean?
S:  You need to start a new paragraph.


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S:  Yeah, it's looking better, but I still have a problem with this scene.
H:  Damn it.


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S:  He's pretty uptight, Cap'n.  He's looking it over one last time before he hands it off to you for the final edit.


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D:  What does this word mean, Hutchinson?  Spunk?  "He was covered in spunk."  Does that mean he had a lot of energy?
H;  I told you that was a stupid word for it, Starsk.


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H:  Fifty Shades eat your heart out.  Who'd a thought what the public really wanted was a little action in the backseat of a striped tomato.


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S:  Where's my cut?  I was your editor after all.


Date: 2013-03-14 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] barancoire.livejournal.com
He-he-he....
Beautifully done, DG!!!
;D

Date: 2013-03-14 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com
Thank you, Bee! :D

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