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duluth ([personal profile] duluthdg) wrote2013-03-14 02:33 pm
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S&H and fanfiction

This is just for fun as a thank you for my editors, Dawn and Anachron.  They've been a huge help on my last couple stories and beyond!  Writing fan fiction is hard work...

H:  I really appreciate this, Starsk.  An author can never edit his own work.
S:  Happy to do it, Hutch.  I never knew you were into slash fiction.

H:  I'm so nervous to have you read that.  I'm sweating.
S:  I'm being very objective.  Don't worry.

H:  You know, you don't have to read it right now.  Take your time.
S:  I can't put it down, Hutch.  Once I read it through, I'll make my edits.

S:  Not now, Cap'n.  I'm busy.

S:  This part doesn't make sense.  I don't know.  The sentence structure is a little awkward.

S:  You have to learn to cut back on the metaphors.  Every detail needs to move the story forward.  Do you see?

H:  The whole damn page is red, Starsk.
S:  You asked me to help you.

H:  What does that mark mean?
S:  You need to start a new paragraph.

S:  Yeah, it's looking better, but I still have a problem with this scene.
H:  Damn it.

S:  He's pretty uptight, Cap'n.  He's looking it over one last time before he hands it off to you for the final edit.

D:  What does this word mean, Hutchinson?  Spunk?  "He was covered in spunk."  Does that mean he had a lot of energy?
H;  I told you that was a stupid word for it, Starsk.

H:  Fifty Shades eat your heart out.  Who'd a thought what the public really wanted was a little action in the backseat of a striped tomato.

S:  Where's my cut?  I was your editor after all.

[identity profile] wightfaerie.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 07:38 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL. Right there with you, honey!!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 07:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I fixed the post...sorry it was kind of mixed up. I have trouble posting to LJ anymore. And thanks. :)

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[identity profile] provencepuss.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 08:12 pm (UTC)(link)
can I have him when you've finished with him; I found ten typos in one paragraph when I was checking a chapter today!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I think Hutch is done with him for the time being. Have at it. :)

[identity profile] barancoire.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautifully done, DG!!!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 08:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, Bee! :D
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[personal profile] hardboiledbaby 2013-03-14 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG, that's inspired! Gave me a much needed happie, thank you babe :D

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I'm so happy if I gave you a happie! :D Thanks!

[identity profile] dawnebeth.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Absolutely LOVE that. heehee. Yes, Starsky, the editor is in the background, just happy that the story is spelled right and reads well. You found some perfect pictures to illustrate your manuscript. I applaud!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 10:39 pm (UTC)(link)
You know, when I was looking through caps, I found a LOT more of Starsky reading than Hutch. :D

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[identity profile] dalegardener.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
*H: The whole damn page is red, Starsk.
S: You asked me to help you.*

This one in particular made me smile. :-) It's the expressions, I think.

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-14 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
My favorite one, too. :)

[identity profile] nancys-soul.livejournal.com 2013-03-15 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
That was great!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-15 01:23 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Nancy! :)

[identity profile] anachron.livejournal.com 2013-03-15 01:22 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, duluth, I love it! They're all brilliant, but my faves are "You have to learn to cut back on metaphors" and "but I still have a problem with this scene." Ha! And Hutch's reaction to each is fabulous -- he is so pained-looking in that second one. Are those similar to the expressions you have when you get the mark-ups back?

Oh, and a few small things -- preceding "I told you that was a stupid word" you have a semi-colon instead of a colon; and you have "fanfiction" in the title and "fan fiction" in the fourth sentence. :p

Sorry, couldn't resist! : )

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-15 01:25 am (UTC)(link)
See the 9th picture down for my reaction.

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[identity profile] ultrapsychobrat.livejournal.com 2013-03-15 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
Very cute. Great use of photos. Wonder what kind of story Hutch would write?

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-15 10:41 am (UTC)(link)
:) Love the icon. Wouldn't it be great to read a slash story by one of the boys? ;-) Thanks!

[identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Over here courtesy of [livejournal.com profile] hardboiledbaby - to say that was fabulous and a hoot, thank you!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-17 04:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, thanks! Baby is so great to have recced this. :) Glad you enjoyed it.
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[identity profile] lauramcewan.livejournal.com 2013-03-18 04:29 am (UTC)(link)
Hahaha that's awesome!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-18 01:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Laura! It was fun to make.

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-03-24 02:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! :)

[identity profile] kerrys2boys.livejournal.com 2013-05-31 09:10 am (UTC)(link)
Ok...Just spat out my drink in one great splutter...too much to take! God the shot with Dobey "what does this word mean?" OMG - what a lot of laughs you've given to me today DG - my face has used muscles it hasn't exercised in ages.

BTW...I want more. You are one seriously funny "cutter". You must have won all those prizes when you were a kid where you had to provide the best fitting caption to a shot or a photo.
Edited 2013-05-31 09:12 (UTC)

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-05-31 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks k2b! :) You know, StarskyHutch 911 used to have a "Caption This" where they put a photo on there for everyone to caption. It was so fun, and everyone had such great responses. Haven't seen one in awhile. If you like this stuff, you should look up the tag, "caption this" and see if that brings them up! :)

[identity profile] miwahni.livejournal.com 2013-07-30 10:49 am (UTC)(link)
That was a LOT of fun! (here via [livejournal.com profile] crack_van

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-07-30 03:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, thanks so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it! :)

[identity profile] marianrose.livejournal.com 2013-07-30 08:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Really funny! Thanks so much for the great laugh. The pictures were so well chosen!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-07-30 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! I'm glad I could give you a laugh. :)
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[identity profile] mrs-sweetpeach.livejournal.com 2013-07-31 01:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so glad this hit the crack van as I doubt I'd have seen it otherwise and it's brilliant. The boys are always fun to look at but the story moves right along with the pictures you selected.

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-07-31 01:40 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm so happy you found and enjoyed this! These are fun to put together because I get to look through so many pics of the boys. :)

[identity profile] diannes-53.livejournal.com 2013-08-01 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
DG that was too funny. I loved the screen caps and you did a wonderful job on the captions. It was perfect!

[identity profile] duluthgirl.livejournal.com 2013-08-01 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
So glad you liked it, Dianne! :D

[identity profile] edioval.livejournal.com 2013-08-11 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Just stumbled over from Crack!van....loved it!